Essay 2: Summary and Evaluation

My Writing Process

  • I began my Summary and Evaluation on rocky ground. It was easy for me to create a keyword search of Eagleton’s essay, and my summary was relatively clear as well. However, my abstract was a bit too long.
  • I wasn’t sure what claim I wanted to make about Eagleton’s work in my evaluation until after I had submitted my first draft to my professor, so my evaluation essay was filled with different claims rather than sticking to just one.
  • Visiting my professor during his office hours was very helpful, and I was able to craft a stronger thesis around Eagleton’s writing. I found my thesis: Eagleton’s final definition of literature influences the other definitions that are evaluated in the essay. I also shortened by abstract and expanded a bit on my summary to fully encapsulate the meaning of Eagleton’s essay.
  • My second draft was a lot clearer than my first, but still needed a bit more clarity. I used a few more examples in my evaluation of his writing, and added a few more details to my summary.
  • By my third draft of the paper, I felt ready to submit to my portfolio. My evaluation covered as much ground as I found useful, and my summary and abstracts were succinct as well.

Links to Drafts

Outline

Peer Review
Draft One

Professor’s Comments on Draft One

Draft Two (Tracked Changes)

Professor’s Comments On Draft Two

Draft Three (Tracked Changes)
 
 

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